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Getsucced
GetsuccedLv12yr
2022-08-24 01:02

Bro this is peak wish fulfillment and I like it. But change that cover pic to a better one. Btw why only one seal, if you use more wouldnt it be more efficient or is it because you felt it would make it op too fast?(if so i dont mind a slow but calculating mc is better and even if he doesnt become a shinobi i feel its better but dont let him blow his cover easily)

In Naruto with the Arc of Embodiment

Orithium
4.3
15 Chs

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caprotx_war
caprotx_warLv4

why not make containers and put them all over the world to collect energy for you

2yr
Orithium
OrithiumAuthor

Precisely, there are so many ways to become OP fast but I want it to be a slow but stable grind. want to be able to write atleast 100 chapters

2yr
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Bierbart
BierbartLv14

Reveal spoiler

2yr

Orange_Car_Slave
Orange_Car_SlaveLv13

For Naruto fanfic the MC is too overpowered. Btw, add Shion to Mc's poke-*cough* Harem. Hanabi is hot!🥵

2yr
Thehighesthol1
Thehighesthol1Lv1

I suggest you read a few chapters and you will fall in love with this story, maybe the story is a bit fast and I like that he is not too close to the main character Which eventually makes him a plot dog. But here the character of mc really suits my taste. So five stars for you🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

2yr
Yamata_no_Orochi
Yamata_no_OrochiLv4

The Mc as a Character/human/person is boring and simpleminded. The story is as Flat as a sheet of paper and the world background is very weak. The writing quality is basic but the stability of updates is there. The Development of the Story is as clear as it is unclear. There is not a clear cut direktion for the story on its self.

2yr
RedBoy07
RedBoy07Lv4

The story is good for me but when I saw the #weaktostrong and #overpowered, I was like . . . . . .. . .

2yr
manny0101
manny0101Lv5

It's like a person speaking continuously without taking a single breath. The paragraphs are just big sentences and it's abhoring to try and read something like this. Bro, you are Canadian. Canada is an english speaking country. At the very least, use punctuations and periods.

2yr
Thananos
ThananosLv14

Awesome fic! Hope you continue soon! Also, hope you're doing alright irl.

2yr
Infinitesimal
InfinitesimalLv14

Interesting, I hype mode and pervert mode active, like history original and please battle in history. ( Very good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

2yr
Savitar_12
Savitar_12Lv3

I hope u keep going ........................................................................................................................

2yr
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