It's my first time to read a horror story. I just read first chapter and I don't know what attracted me to read further and further. The story line is awsome and amazing. The best thing that I noticed in this writing is that the author's style of depiction, as it seems like the author writes the story in a flow, I mean the concepts are in the mind and the author depicted them as they are without any exaggeration or extra spices. We learn from our mistakes and you are improving with every new chapter. I am really impressed with the influential writing, storyline, characters depiction and even the title is attention gaining. Keep it up and you will shine as a shinning star.
Maryam_Mayo
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LIKEAYESHA_FAHIM:Yeah, you are right. I was just thinking that the author has the ability to write everything in a fluid manner. I was just wondering if the author has a mind.
AYESHA_FAHIM:Yeah, you are right. I was just thinking that the author has the ability to write everything in a fluid manner. I was just wondering if the author has a mind.
Maryam_Mayo: Thanks, for writing such a delightful comment. đ