Unreadable juvenile garbage. Even for me this grammar is way too bad to be able to enjoy reading this story. My English sucks and I notice mistake after mistake reading this. Not only the grammar is a joke... the story stole many elements from other better fics and the whole story is juvenile and childish. Overall this is as bad as it can be. 0 / 5
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