Writing Quality: It is very good, with little to no grammatical errors from what I can read. It's quite easy to understand and that's a good thing after all no matter how sophisticated of a writing you have, it doesn't matter much if readers don't understand it. Story Development: Story hasn't gotten far yet to draw a conclusion on it but it seems good enough for now. Character Design: Nothing much to say here, it's almost perfect. Updating stability: Yeah this needs some work, honestly I am more hooked than I initially thought. I hope the author can post 1 chapter a day since I love cultivation novels and this is one of the few cultivation fanfics that seem good even if it's based on AST. World Background: Done perfectly, can't ask for more.

First five-star review, thanks to the author for the interesting history, I really like how it's going. English is not my first language, so I can't say much more than that I like it, sorry.

Man, I was looking for a Fanfic of this work a long time ago I read one but the author stopped posting so if you make it to the end I'll follow.

Uma das melhores novels de cultivo que eu já vi nesse site, se a tacha de envio de capítulos aumentasse eu daria 5 estrelas. Uma das melhores novels de cultivo que eu já vi nesse site, se a tacha de envio de capítulos aumentasse eu daria 5 estrelas.

I never read AST, but i like this fanfic and I will keep read all ( my language is not english,so sorry for mistakes in my text )🇧🇷THANKSSSSSSSSSSSS GIVE ME MOREEEEEEEE

Writing Quality: It is very good, with little to no grammatical errors from what I can read. It's quite easy to understand and that's a good thing after all no matter how sophisticated of a writing you have, it doesn't matter much if readers don't understand it.

Hi Man great novel i really like it so far i hope you keep uplaoding it i wish you all the luck my man i only want to say that you got me as a reader to your fiction cant wait for more.

after a long time a good ast fanfic . it is good and main charector is amazing . I like the plot , hope this fanfic can continue till the end.👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙

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Qualidade da escrita: É muito boa, com pouco ou nenhum erro gramatical pelo que consigo ler. É muito fácil de entender e isso é bom, afinal, não importa o quão sofisticado seja sua escrita, não importa muito se os leitores não entenderem. Desenvolvimento da história: A história ainda não foi longe para chegar a uma conclusão, mas parece boa o suficiente por enquanto. Design de personagens: Nada muito a dizer aqui, é quase perfeito. Atualizando a estabilidade: Sim, isso precisa de algum trabalho, honestamente, estou mais viciado do que pensei inicialmente. Espero que o autor possa postar 1 capítulo por dia, já que adoro romances de cultivo e esta é uma das poucas fanfics de cultivo que parecem boas, mesmo que sejam baseadas em AST. World Background: Feito perfeitamente, não posso pedir mais. img