Everyone else is talking about repetition but they are forgetting the real problem yeah! The story is—- Well, you don’t need to have average IQ for it, yeah!! The storyline is below basic. I started reading because I don’t like over complicated plots yeah. But the reactions of the FL when she meets the cheating couple are literally st**pid. Not only that, the conversations between the ml and fl are uncoordinated. The ml says really absurd things and not in a good way. The author should work on her writing style. Let the characters go through the events and their emotions be exposed. The grammar, normally I’d ignore but I just can’t get over the continuous use of idoit instead of idiot. Also breath where breathe should be and breathe where breath should be. There’s also thier instead of their. And these are the ones that are often seen. The author badly needs an editor. I’m not encouraged to read further than I already have. But good luck
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