Review Detail of DotComplex in Pokemon : The Force Of Chaos

Item: Pokemon : The Force Of Chaos
Rating: 5

Review detail

DotComplexLv21yrDotComplex

Is good so far. Good english and grammar, story is unique and intriguing, MC feels a bit too edgy sometimes but that doesn't really ruin the feel of it that much.

Pokemon : The Force Of Chaos

MilfHunter1

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MilfHunter1AuthorMilfHunter1

The problem is it's hard to write a dark story without a edgy mc , I'm not trying to make some cringy self insert bullshit

1yr

AzureFluteFan2Lv4AzureFluteFan2

Edge in moderation can make the story better, but constant long winded, low impact edgy speeches can ruin a story. I haven’t read it yet so I’ll just read and judge for myself.

1yr