The writing's really good - I'd say it's in the upper 20-30% of all output here on WN. It's not without hiccups here and there (things being capitalized that shouldn't, for instance - it's 'deja vu', lowercase), but those hiccups barely detract at all from the content itself, and they're nothing a thorough proofreading and editing session can't fix. PS - this wouldn't happen to have been based on the movies 'Bruce Almighty' and/or 'Oh God', would it?
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