Review Detail of T3AR in I Make Millions with My Overbearing CEO Snake Husband

I know right , i lliked that story hoped for it to get choosen but i don't know if it did

This is the third time

The formatting is better with this one. The other one has missing spaces after the MC's name in the beginning chapters. It also kept changing the ML's name between his English and Chinese name with no rhyme or reason. Names should be consistent in the narrative. It can change between when characters are talking or switching character's pov, but the book was in third person omniscient. This story seems to be better that the other one. It has better world building by showing how the MC went from a snake to a human.

I read this one's female snake version, it was a okay read like slice of life type but this one gotten axed ...