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Flower_Something
Flower_SomethingLv22yr
2022-08-20 00:45

Well the opening isnt what I expected by the title, and there are sole punctuation and capitalization errors- but over all im curious to see where this goes

I LOST MY VIRGINITY IN A DREAM

Isabelle_Kenny
4.6
4 Chs

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Author_Bright
Author_BrightLv10

Oh my!!! This is absolutely fantastic! I can't believe I read more than I honestly planned to. This plotline is amazing and truth be told I love it. it's a five star for me.

2yr

Isabelle_Kenny
Isabelle_KennyAuthor

Thanks everyone for the support Expect that I will try my best to make the story even better . Thank you for your review I really appreciate

2yr
Drei05
Drei05Lv4

I advice not to put the dialogues of the characters inside the paragraphs as it creates a confusion. also after using a comma(,), add a space to make it look more organized. The story is interesting and still have a lot of potential considering it only have 2 chaps. So keep up the good work and keep improving! (๑・ω-)

2yr
KyrieUzumaki
KyrieUzumakiLv13

I like the book a lot! Though I will say the paragraghs in the chapters are a bit long an believe needs to be a little spaced out but overall the story is really nice and I love the plot in the story I am definitely excited to see what's next with the story :D

2yr
Halimah_Bello
Halimah_BelloLv2

omg, reading this book made my day, I mean the author did a wonderful job but a few grammatical errors, but when you skip through them you find it fun to read.

2yr
kerryn
kerrynLv4

The story is quite unique. With only two chapters and I am already interested. Dear author, keep updating. May love to know what happens next.

2yr
Isabelle_Kenny
Isabelle_KennyAuthor

Updating the next chapter really soon❤❤ Thanks for your support and reviews ,will surely do better in the next chapter. 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝

2yr
Isha_24
Isha_24Lv1

I really liked the story. It just 2 chapters , but I feel like I want to read it further . The story development is very nice. The writer is doing great job.

2yr
Little_North_Star
Little_North_StarLv14

This book is fantastic..although its just two chapters and little errors here and there..the author managed to make it captivating and intriguing..🌺❤️..good job author..i support you

2yr
Heartless_Qi_
Heartless_Qi_Lv3

Great book loved every minute of it great writing quality amazing story development it is amazing Character design oh don't get me started felt like I was the characters themselves and the world background is just amazing

2yr
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