Review Detail of Jason_Ruggeti in My OP Minion System in the Apocalypse

After reading 146 chapters: So, the potential is great. The narrating style is pretty good. That being said, the story you read on the first volume is VERY different to the rest of the novel. The jumps in between memories and povs make it hard to connect with ANY of the characters. It'd be different if it was set up like this at the start, however this looks like the first couple of volumes of a 3k+ chapter novel where only one or two relevant characters have been introduced. Another thing to be aware of is that the world building is pretty lacking overall, there's really no clear picture of how everything is settled (from a writing pov, cause theres prob a pic in discord or smth of the forest and diff settlements). Lastly, the power system is weird asf, both the characters and readers dont know how to rank anything, which leads me to the thing that actually pissed me off: the demonic sword's power is dogshit compared to the price it requires. I think the author has a ton of great ideas and potential, but not really deciding on anything other than making William seem like an NPC leads to frustration. Would also love to have at least some sort of lead on some situatios that the author seems to just skip, like abandoning Chloe twice (at least), because it seems both times "just happened". If you're willing to read through some slow paced build up of an intricate backstory, by all means read on, but the story really hasn't picked up any pace up until now... will probably come back when this story has 500+ chapters Best of luck author!