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Love_C_raft
Love_C_raftLv142yr
2022-11-06 08:46

interesting novel, with slow pace, fleshing to see an mc who is not op, but with all good things comes bad things, the mc is personality is pretty bland, he is not completely cold blooded but he is cold in a way, he doesn't seem to have personal feelings what so ever, he is mostly calculating situation almost like a machine and human hybrid, he is bullied but he doesn't seem to feel any anger nor care which is weird, the mc has no magic, just minions, but in the world he is in there are people who can avoid death, tho he has enchanted things but he personally isn't that strong without sacrificing his memories further more turning into emotionless pupet. though it is a little boring I'm gonna keep reading cause why not,finish what I have started.

My OP Minion System in the Apocalypse

Haobo_Zhang
4.3
310 Chs

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LucasBarlow24
LucasBarlow24Lv3

Hey, it's been three months. I am assuming you read the novel further, is it good? Do your points get addressed, as in he gets a personality and personal strength not hust minions. And if you dropped it, can you tell which chapter you dropped it and why? Sorry for all the questions, I wanna know if I can read this novel. Thank you!

1yr
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Love_C_raft
Love_C_raftLv14

You can read it, the story is interesting, I don want to ruin your experience by giving you spoilers, but just make sure to take breaks between reading, sometimes it will raise your angry by LITTLE, personality wise this is a slow story so it is slow improvements but not much.

LucasBarlow24:Hey, it's been three months. I am assuming you read the novel further, is it good? Do your points get addressed, as in he gets a personality and personal strength not hust minions. And if you dropped it, can you tell which chapter you dropped it and why? Sorry for all the questions, I wanna know if I can read this novel. Thank you!
1yr
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LucasBarlow24
LucasBarlow24Lv3

Thank You! I will be reading this novel after it accumulated some more chapters. The premise seemed interesting to me and I have not read this kinda system novel yet.

Love_C_raft:You can read it, the story is interesting, I don want to ruin your experience by giving you spoilers, but just make sure to take breaks between reading, sometimes it will raise your angry by LITTLE, personality wise this is a slow story so it is slow improvements but not much.
1yr
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Haobo_Zhang
Haobo_ZhangAuthor

Author here, are you looking to read a system novel with an MC who isn't just crying all the time? Writing novels is not a hobby its a lifestyle--prose? character development? worldbuilding? Seen it all. Are you looking for something special, something refreshing? Like a nice cup of ice-cold lemonade? I've got a it all. It'll be something unlike anything you'll ever read.

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Elemorr
ElemorrLv1

Review This concept of a minion system is really fresh and the progression of this system isn't too fast or too slow. It's the perfect pace to be satisfying yet not overwhelming. One of my favourite aspect of the novel so far are the vivid character backstories, instead of just having the character say their past, the author shows their past in a flashback which is really cool. It is a really engaging novel and the grammar is basically perfect with hardly any errors. If you're looking for something new to read this is it!

2yr
Daniel224
Daniel224Lv1

From what I’ve seen thus far, this is great. The story is different from the usual I have read. I absolute enjoyed the first five chapters and can’t wait for more. Hoping this isn’t dropped is my wish. There are so many questions, yet not enough answers. Only by reading will I find them, anyways, this is an absolute yes.

2yr
JAGuyr
JAGuyrLv15

I stopped at chapter 64. Just after a long Author’s Note stating a massive change to the story. Again. I must have joined late enough that other changes were minimally invasive, but an entire character (as far as I have read) just disappeared with no explanation. Decided to stop before paying because of the drastic change(s). It may not bother others. Just threw me off to much. Not a bad read over all.

2yr
Jakobik_Jakobicek
Jakobik_JakobicekLv14

Have read till chapter 20 and Its pretty boring. Mc is dead inside and gathering Wood by hitting it with hand, looks like we are in minecraft :)

1yr
Just_A_Reader_20
Just_A_Reader_20Lv13

Banana? .

2yr
dndeath
dndeathLv14

It is well writen. but if you expect an overpowered mc with a op system (from the tags and title) you might be dissapointed. not many other characters systems have been introduced so far (40 chapters in) but for a majority I have thought "I would probably prefer if this was the mcs system". It is rather slow paced so he might be op in another 100 chapters, I don't know. But a lot of other humans are seemingly more op than him (he is currently ranked 20th-30th on the global leaderboard). to me that goes against the definition of OP.

2yr
Trey_Richardson
Trey_RichardsonLv4

So far I really love the book and the main character. The only critique I have is the main characters and the minions level ups. The MC’s level ups seam a bit force like when they happen I would prefer them to happen mid doing something. And he look at it later rather than like when he wakes up or something. But I can live with it. Overall a really good book I really hope it can make it to well over a thousand chapters.

2yr
SaIted_Fish
SaIted_FishLv4

bruhhh the elves here are not vegetarian😆😶😶

2yr
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