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This is a pretty good novel so far, I’ m not really good at giving constructive criticism so I don’t have anything significant to say. Though I would like to say that the main cha racter is inconsistent with the way he acts sometimes, though it’s not really a problem since it seems like the main character is starting to develop in the later chapters (100s)

Demon Immortal

kirupakaran

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Hey, Thanks for your input... I did notice this problem. But I feel no one's character remains stagnant. His reactions are shaped by his experiences. In the beginning, when he was inexperienced, he was a little brash. But once he starts to run into powerful cultivators, he becomes a little cautious in his approach. But eventually reverts back to his brash self once more. As he gets more powerful, his character will begin to take shape in a permanent manner. Do read on and enjoy!!!

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Thanks for the clarification, I’d like to ask do you plan on doing romance/harem, one night stands or anything of that sort or are you unsure yet of what to do? I’ m curious since I’d like to know if you do it would it be more of a side thing in the story or would it play a major part of the story? Regardless of the way it plays out im happy with whatever your gonna do. Have a good one. 👍

kirupakaran:Hey, Thanks for your input... I did notice this problem. But I feel no one's character remains stagnant. His reactions are shaped by his experiences. In the beginning, when he was inexperienced, he was a little brash. But once he starts to run into powerful cultivators, he becomes a little cautious in his approach. But eventually reverts back to his brash self once more. As he gets more powerful, his character will begin to take shape in a permanent manner. Do read on and enjoy!!!