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Stulus
StulusLv42yr
2022-11-27 12:04

I want to talk about how this novel was written, and that was carefully and well planned. I'll admit that the plot isn't really anything new, but the writing shows the care the author placed in this work of literature. The reactions of the characters match their age and nothing is taken overboard or things are introduced to make everything seem subtle, much like it would seem in real life. Evens the side characters are somewhat built upon as the author made mention to the side characters past, in a way that didn't detract from the story. They have written magical realism in the best way possible by introducing all characters to some level of intelligence and to ensure that the obvious hidden meanings people would say in regular conversation comes out. I've read many light novel but as far as magical realism goes this takes the cake. The plot seems to be like other clichés but just written in a logical way, they have others remain fairly oblivious to slight insults or snide remarks the Mc to and from the MC. This isn't some person writing a chunni fantasy, rather it's a person creating through a singular perspective a whole new world. If I happened to not mention this before then I will now. This story is great, well written and should be read. Yeah I just really enjoyed this story.

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