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After reading the first 3 chapters, in my opinion, it didn’t show a good introduction to the story and what is going on.

Kingdoms of Dust: Rebuilding The Nation

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D2_E2_V2AuthorD2_E2_V2

Thank you for your criticism. I'll try to write a better introduction in my other novels

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D2_E2_V2AuthorD2_E2_V2

Another suggestion from is me, to please try to read the 10 chapters. If you don't like it until that leave it. I know it's on me for not making the start that interesting but give it a try. It might change your mind.[img=recommend]

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