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Hibah_Siddiqui
Hibah_SiddiquiLv12yr
2022-11-06 23:17

I find your narration skills good. The way your story is developing is perfect... Plot also has so much potential and I find your story interesting.. keep going buddy.

Reincarnated Magus

NanotechPikachu
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141 Chs

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thnx

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NanotechPikachu
NanotechPikachuAuthor

Author here. I know that I overdid it by giving 5 stars. There are lot of grammer mistakes in the chapters so readers please forgive me for that. I am not well versed in English. I hope you all support me by voting and giving Powerstones. I will try to make this novel more entertaining. Thnx

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AYESHA_FAHIM
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The book was the most fascinating I've ever read. The characters are superbly portrayed, the language choice is fantastic, and the plot is surprising. Every chapter has a shocking turn in it. The process of reading never ends. I want to read this book through to its wonderful end. You must read this book or you'll get addicted. devoted author😋💖

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CHVA2001
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Writing quality needs to be improved but concept and plot are interesting and characters and world background are well described and keep releasing new chapters 👍👍👍

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maylily_jk
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Even though it is not a typical genre I go for, I liked it a lot. The plot is intriguing. I am looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍

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aartishankar_21
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The consept and plot setting is nice, Author has good sense of narration and I loved the characters settings too❤️👍all the best author. [img=recommend]

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Joshan_Jo
Joshan_JoLv3

The story is interesting and the story development is also good. The author did a good job in portraying well. Overall, it's a book worth a read. Keep up the good author. Fighting !!!!!

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Bebebeaver
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Absolutely love the story plots and the ideas! [img=update]

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mujaki2
mujaki2Lv15

the author cleaned up the first 30 chapters and it made a huge difference I have not read the original chapters however after the cleaned up chapters were finished I could see the difference in quality. up until the end of the first volume the story is riveting appears to have a clear direction and has excellent characterization. starting with the second volume the author became more and more insecure and so continuously asks the readers if he's doing okay. At this point (the second volume)the story becomes a different novel still very creative but a bit more chaotic , all the way up to the paywall the chapters get shorter and half filled with 5-7 author notes and requests for donations. the decrease in description and character development leads to a short summary of the books action, replacing immersive story with a bland digest version. I made it to ch 71 before I stopped, perhaps it improved later. but my review is an average chapter length.

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kartik_agarwal
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Dropped within 13 chapters. The story is too cliche for me, if you can make it past 15 chapters, you might like the story and can continue it.

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