Review Detail of Unsightly in That time I became a god (Given up)

A month ago I tried writing a tensura story but I realized I didn't have the "flow" so after reading some S I fanfics I am ready to try again +!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!