Review Detail of MasterY in The Extra's Dominance

I really like this novel, it's well-written, coherent, and coherence, as a newbie, I really felt jealous while reading your work :> The story is interesting and has a room for improvement. I just suggest making the MC more realistic, I mean you would panick, if you transformed into a different world and had a robotic voice talking with you suddenly, but the MC character was pretty calm about it, it's cool and all, but I just suggest you to show more realistic human emotions in the MC. However, you don't have to change anything in the previous chapters. Anyways, it is really a fun novel and I read only 8 chapter as I'm writing this review, it's super fun and I like the POV. I give it a solid 5~