Review Detail of Small_Otaku in I am in a new world, playing an offline RPG game

suggestion: i hope those "supernatural" human have power level not just C, B, A, S, SS, SSS QEFJQNS and background story abt those supernatural hoomans

Why doesn't he learn spiritual energy and fuse with stamina, making something similar to a chakra or name it as you like? Fuse the thing with mana, creating a new energy he can produce, and his better than mana, stamina, spiritual energy, combine

Bro, most of times when you use the expressions "you could say", "well", and "now", you really can just take out it from the phrase and won't make difference. Sometimes we use these expressions while speaking, but using while writting will make the text repetitive, wearing. So, I suggest you try stop using these stuff. Maybe I am making a poor judgment, but I believe your work will show improvement if you read one or two times more before you conclude. Mistakes like misspelled words will lessen. The story is interesting, I hope it continues and always improving.[img=recommend]

yes,

so bad, I like the concept but the structuring of the sentences and English is to bad

Hello, I try to read the book but when I see that cover I can only associate it with bad Twilight/TVD or Teen Wolf fics and end up not reading it, can you change it? even a simple color would be better

Great story could use an edit from a person with a better grasp on the English language but I don't mind as its not your main language status updates could be less frequent or remove all skill descriptions and just show basic level and stat increases it grinds my gears when chapters have status screens taking up a good portion when we seen it on the previous chapter with no changes but over all great story [img=update]

how can i pay for the book instead of chapters?