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Rainbow420
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2022-09-24 09:47

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Dual Devils: Solo Hero

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Nyxxie_Auclair
Nyxxie_AuclairLv1

Why do you capitalize the first letter of every word? That was a big turn-off for me. And the scene changes provided in asterisks were also the same. Other than that, this story is great! Has good potential

2yr

Ink_Quanta
Ink_QuantaLv12

Took an overview seems nice....Nice Concept can't say much as far as I have read it was a good read..........Best of luck for your next enaveduars

2yr
Rin_Nurnia
Rin_NurniaLv4

I have no problem with the storyline but the only thing I wanted to point out is that try not to capitalize every single of your letters. You can use it only, for example, the characters names, places and when they're summoning the powers(?)

2yr
Zherie17
Zherie17Lv1

Here is my review to your story (though, you did not personally ask me to give this one.) Assuming that English language is not your first one, grammar and technicality wise, please, AGAIN, refrain from CAPITALIZING each word on your paragraphs. I found this a bit dull, disturbing and annoying while reading the first chapter. Thank you.

2yr
MsBamasAngel
MsBamasAngelLv1

Ray is a interesting character. I felt sorry for him because he thought of himself as weak. This is a neat story. I'd like to see more. Keep up the good work.

2yr
Emmanuel_Abraham_2079
Emmanuel_Abraham_2079Lv1

The start was awesome! I love monsters stories and this one got that ingredient that wants me to stay up reading. The story and character development were brilliant. keep writing!!

2yr
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