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NotSubaru
NotSubaruLv32yr
2022-09-07 22:38

I changed my mind. this story has no grammatical errors, only some hard vocabulary. there was this word I thought the author misspelled but it has actually had definition. The story is good just like My vampire System hooked me reading. Keep up the good work

Rise of the Looper

konza
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konza
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Thanks for the review!

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NB00000
NB00000Lv1

This is an engaging and very descriptive story—five stars for the author's writing quality, story development, character designs, and world background. I was not too fond of the curse words used in the story. Nevertheless, the author does an excellent job at storytelling.

2yr

MisterEnd0821
MisterEnd0821Lv2

this really is an average joe like Luke. The story from chapter 1 is so naturally well written and the concept of him starting by looking for a job is unique. It has a lot of potential and is proud to say, a well-done fellow novelist!

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konza
konzaAuthor

Reveal spoiler

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PEN_CAT
PEN_CATLv1

Read all first five chapters, couldn't drop em. Interesting writing bro. I'm not usually able to wrap my head around novels with mana and element stuffs, but you made it simple for a dumbo like moi. P.S:- More stabbing! Jk but still

2yr
DaoistvDClLB
DaoistvDClLBLv1

I like the concept of the existence of a parallel world with monsters in it. And also, your writing style is amazing! Looking forward to the next update!

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FREAKKETTONE
FREAKKETTONELv12

Simply one of the best starting novel I have read. Good writing quality, well done world building and an interesting plot. I'm officially hook up, Keep it up, I'm enthrilled.

2yr
omniscientreader22
omniscientreader22Lv1

Wow, I am very impressed with the story so far!!!!! Keep it up, I can't wait for more chapters, so I hope you'll be back soon with more!!!!!

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NYXLOGOS
NYXLOGOSLv3

good

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