Review Detail of _Medeiros in (Game of Thrones) The Pale Khal

Item: (Game of Thrones) The Pale Khal
Rating: 3

Review detail

_MedeirosLv21yr_Medeiros

the story has many holes like an 8 year old being able to defeat 3 adult fighters and honestly jon's idea turns into an avatar and just laughs but that's just my opinion I wish you good luck with the story

(Game of Thrones) The Pale Khal

Telling_Tall_Tales

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Telling_Tall_TalesAuthorTelling_Tall_Tales

Thanks for the review. Your right about the plot holes but I’m just writing for myself. Sorry you didn’t enjoy.

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the_kings_bastardLv1the_kings_bastard

I also don't like that the main character is too strong. But solely because of the idea, it's worth reading

Telling_Tall_Tales:Thanks for the review. Your right about the plot holes but I’m just writing for myself. Sorry you didn’t enjoy.

1yr

the_kings_bastardLv1the_kings_bastard

I read the fan fiction. And I really liked it. Daenerys khaleesi number 2

1yr