Overall, not that bad of a start. A few repetitions here and there, but not that many grammatical errors. Would 100% recommend using Grammarly(the free browser extension), it should iron out quite a bit of writing inconsistencies.
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since you gave it 5 stars ill read it^^ simply bcause i like your fanfics[img=recommend]
Well, keep in mind that it's someone's first writing, some sentences will seem awkward at first
thescorpiona:since you gave it 5 stars ill read it^^ simply bcause i like your fanfics[img=recommend]
i admit i quite liked it. thanks for the warning though
VeganMaster:Well, keep in mind that it's someone's first writing, some sentences will seem awkward at first
yo vegan, is it harem or nah?
Haven't caught up to it, and don't have much time to read lately ;( When I last read it didn't seem to be(keep in mind that I've only read a few chaps)
LulzLowKey:yo vegan, is it harem or nah?
sadge. well, how's the enel one piece story going? dropped it a bit after the au seastone was introduced. plus, I was taking a break cause I was binge reading too much.
VeganMaster:Haven't caught up to it, and don't have much time to read lately ;( When I last read it didn't seem to be(keep in mind that I've only read a few chaps)
Decent enough, I guess. Been having less time to write lately. The story is still an AU in some other parts as well, still think the seastone part wasn't specified enough in the original to be called an AU tho :))
LulzLowKey:sadge. well, how's the enel one piece story going? dropped it a bit after the au seastone was introduced. plus, I was taking a break cause I was binge reading too much.
yeah, but it did feel like the story was going off the deep end with the theories. Are you planning any new story? your fanfics have always been A-tier.
VeganMaster:Decent enough, I guess. Been having less time to write lately. The story is still an AU in some other parts as well, still think the seastone part wasn't specified enough in the original to be called an AU tho :))
