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Wamax
WamaxLv11yr
2023-10-17 21:28

I've read up to chapter 70 so far. I liked the fan fiction in many ways. But there are also bad sides, I absolutely did not like time travel, that is, not time travel itself, but how it is served here. I hope it gets better. (Translator)

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I really like this novel and I am giving the below for the fun of it but still at least tell me if you like it or not 1: TENSURA Tasks: become a true dragon Unify the world and bring it to peace Learn every skill in the tensura world Name all the primordial (demons, spirits and angels) and true dragons and adopt demon lord milim nava as your neice Become egnoliged by the voice of the world as the successor of veldanava Gain total control of the voice of the world and merge it with the skills akashic record and wisdom king Raphael and evolve the new skill to become a manas 2: NARUTO Tasks: master all chakra nature including ying and yang nature Become the jinchuriki of all the tailed beasts including jigen otsutsuki’s ten tails Learn and master every shinobi arts such as sealing, tijuts, ninjutsu, genjutsu kenjutsu and samurai abilities Become the student of all 3 legendary Sanins and sign all three of their scrolls and master all 3 respective sage arts Help kaguya with her redemption and gain hamura and hagoromo’s powers Gain the Byakugan, the, and finally, the Rinne-Sharingan and destroy the evil otsutsuki’s and save the good ones 3: FARY TAIL Tasks: master all magic’s including the 3 (dragon, demon, and god) Slayer magics When the eclipse gate is opened go to the time of the dragons and bring eggs of all types of dragons back for the continuation of the dragon race Challenge and defeat acnologia and become the new king of dragons Reunite arrine and erza and help them become mother and daughter Save ultier from her sacrifice during the dragon invation Cure mavis and zerefs curse 4: BLEACH Tasks: become hollow, quinzi and soul reaper hybrid Master all hollow, quinzi and soul reaper powers Kill Yhwach and become king of quinzi’s Kill Aizen Sosuke and become king of hollow’s Absorb the fragments of the soul king and become the soul king Fuse with the hogyoku and merge it with his zanpakto making it a double bladed 5: DEMANCHI Tasks: learn and master forging from all the gods of smithing and become the best blacksmith Become the king of xenos save all the xenos in the dungeon Conquer the dungeon and defeat the black dragon Kill all evil gods in the mortal plain Become level 10 and then become a god and train to gain the divine domains of creation, destruction, nature, hunt family and fatherhood Learn every weapon combat and martial arts and the culture of every race 6: STAR WARS Tasks: master all force abilities both the Jedi and the sith and learn the culture of every race Find the copies of all sith and Jedi hollocrons Craft 2 double sided light saver with 4 different cyber crystals blue, Wight, sith red but natural and the dark saber one Conquer both the republic and the separatists Built your own mother ship using the combined knowledge from the Jedi world Take at least 2 apprentices 7: HARRY POTTER Tasks: master all fields of magic both human and magical creatures and learn the culture of every race Adopt and raise harry potter as your own son Become a teacher at Hogwarts from harry’s first year to last year Find and pass the trials of the founders and take complete control of Hogwarts and become lord of the 4 founder’s houses Unify muggles, wizard’s and magical creatures and end the status of secrecy Collect every magical animal as your familiar including slytherin basilisk and create your own garden of every magical plants Save both Lily Potter and Alice longbottom Collect all 3 deathly hollows and become engaged to lady death which is the conception of death in every reality Make it that he creates an extra dimension in his inner world that is separated from the rest of the world and he can open and close the portal for it whenever he wants and it is the fusion of lady deaths domain + his ancestral home from the harry potter world and his garden and his magical animal range + the sky castle from tensura where his family (wife, children, siblings and neices) and close friends live Whenever he will go to the above seven worlds for absorbing them he will be restrained to make it a true challenge for him

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