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slimy_Boi
slimy_BoiAuthor2yr
2022-08-11 01:01

shameless author (or translator) is giving himself a review. I hope that you guys would enjoy this like I do even if my translation isn't the greatest. I hope you guys will be able to give me some tips how to fix it or help me.

The Video Game Tycoon

slimy_Boi
4.1
761 Chs

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Kabuk5
Kabuk5Lv14

Read the description , saw this - "the Japanese Zhu Yuxing", became suspicious.

2yr
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yenool_senut
yenool_senutLv4

Kabuk5:Read the description , saw this - "the Japanese Zhu Yuxing", became suspicious.
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2yr
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shashank_bhatt
shashank_bhattLv14

Dude Why don't you try to translate the "King of Hollywood". Webnovel dropped it after 60 chapters but I think it was really good. Or you could go with "The best Director" both are good Hollywood novel.

2yr
slimy_Boi
slimy_BoiAuthor

may think about it

shashank_bhatt:Dude Why don't you try to translate the "King of Hollywood". Webnovel dropped it after 60 chapters but I think it was really good. Or you could go with "The best Director" both are good Hollywood novel.
2yr
overlap
overlapLv6

can you give link raw this novel ?

2yr
Ficmastery
FicmasteryLv4

can you post the novel in other site? since PC users cant read novels in this site anymore?

2yr
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slimy_Boi
slimy_BoiAuthor

you serious? maybe I will do that in wattpad under name of Tokyo Video Game Tycoon

Ficmastery:can you post the novel in other site? since PC users cant read novels in this site anymore?
2yr
Ficmastery
FicmasteryLv4

Yes, try to read in or browser or check the webnovel forum, you dont be able to read full chapter

2yr
RobinH7564
RobinH7564Lv10

Update the novel

2yr
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slimy_Boi
slimy_BoiAuthor

? yes I will update 100 more chapters once I get access to pc

RobinH7564:Update the novel
2yr
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RobinH7564
RobinH7564Lv10

Thanks

slimy_Boi:? yes I will update 100 more chapters once I get access to pc
2yr
MeepsNewGroove
MeepsNewGrooveLv4

Naaaaah g, aint no way a Japanese guys name starts with ”Zhu” so this is most definitely a Chinese novel

2yr
slimy_Boi
slimy_BoiAuthor

it js

MeepsNewGroove:Naaaaah g, aint no way a Japanese guys name starts with ”Zhu” so this is most definitely a Chinese novel
2yr
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Other Reviews
Fito
FitoLv5

the translation is good, I had already seen this novel with automatic translation before, and it seems to me that it has an interesting beginning, the mc likes games and wants to do business with them, the plot revolves around the creation of games and the company, It does not vary much beyond that, there is no romance or anything temporary.

2yr

Redzeth
RedzethLv13

Honestly don’t know why the TL calls himself a translator. This is basically just a straight rip from mtl. Even the so called “editted” chapters are close to unreadable. If you wanted to make a mame for yourself and maybe even a bit of money then you should have put in some actual effort.

2yr
illegal_incognito
illegal_incognitoLv14

chapter 1.... im having a stroke in my english..... this message took me an hour to type with all my errors from the stroke i recieved

2yr
TIFOEL
TIFOELLv1

топовая вещь! Очень понравилось! Люблю такие истории! Прочитал 705 глав и не жалею!

2yr
StarGod
StarGodLv11

I don't know what happened, but now, starting from chapter 10, I can't finish reading the rest of the chapter, as the website says I need to download the app to continue (I was already at chapter 279).

2yr
IkeBladeWarrior
IkeBladeWarriorLv14

One of the best stories I have read. Good job translating the story author so others like me can read this. I see that it's been some months since it was updated. Hopefully it will be updated soon. If you like a "realistic" story, and love videogames, this is a must read.

1yr
FiLL88
FiLL88Lv1

now on 300+ chapters ... it's difficult to read, monotonous, sometimes boring, but ... interesting)).....................................................

2yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Writing quality is bad. It is not to discourage the translator but I think that the translator has to become an author. The story is so bad in the quality of the writing and the incorrect use of names. that the only and best option is to stop publishing the translation. Then you have to remake the story using the disgusting original story as a reference; turning Chinese garbage into a story of its own so that it can be pleasantly read by humans with souls. So to summarize, modify the whole story. You have to change the names, not use Chinese phrases, change the story title, change the MC name, change the synopsis, and use an international western style so that anyone from Europe or America can understand. Postscript, never use Chinese, Korean and similar names in a story written in English, Spanish, French or Portuguese; that also includes not using those names in the synopsis or title.

2yr
LootofMoney
LootofMoneyLv5

for some one who love games I recommend this story a lot of legendary popular gets plagiarized in here soo over all good story thumbs up for the translators only the name sometimes get complicated Anitingelse is good💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯

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