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Satireman
SatiremanLv122yr
2022-09-07 02:24

I am seriously disappointed, here's a short explanation: this novel is a scam. Here's a long explanation; this novel is a scam because: 1° It's what I call a "pay to fame," it'd take a blind man/woman to not see this novel's top fans' fake accounts and the ridiculous amount of super gifts given by them. I know some authors use this method amongst themselves in an organized way (it's VERY visible really), which is fine in my opinion, however, this book tops the chart and pierces the ceiling. Way too much "pay to fame." 2° The characters are 2D carton boards with plastic edges, holed pants, and sorry excuses of wool underwear. All this mixmashmush to say they are not relatable. 3° The Writing quality is... passable for an online translated novel but not great at all. Not recommended. 4° Story Development, hum, I haven't dared read further than chapter 20 to save some of my neurons, I'll need them in my old age. 5° World Background, it surprisingly isn't that bad but very cliché. 6° Stability of Updates: obviously it's the only one I scored 5/5. All in all, NOT a reading recommandation.

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M_Shaz_3A
M_Shaz_3ALv15

yes ... most of those user have only commented on this novel only

Acluduo
AcluduoLv6

well it's actually obvious just look at their account level the highest is lvl 3

JustSomeDude00
JustSomeDude00Lv4

bruh like a paparazzi only sees what his eyes wants to see. Not even passing the 100 mark you already judge the novel to the core. it's like accusing a black guy of stealing when he just shows odd behavior in streets

AwfulAbsoluteSweet
AwfulAbsoluteSweetLv4

Dude…20 Ch is enough. I really don’t get the “you need to read the whole thing to write a review” bs. They dropped off at Ch 20 because they didn’t like it, simple as that: their opinion. No story will ever fit everybody’s tastes, not that serious. Furthermore the claims that this novel is botted makes sense

JustSomeDude00:bruh like a paparazzi only sees what his eyes wants to see. Not even passing the 100 mark you already judge the novel to the core. it's like accusing a black guy of stealing when he just shows odd behavior in streets
JustSomeDude00
JustSomeDude00Lv4

bruh it's not a review when you only read 20 chapters of the novel. It's like watching the trailer then calling it trash and waste of time to read without even watching the movie. The problem here is writing a review on this novel where literally everybody can see. If this person didn't say he doesn't dare read 20 chapters ahead FOR SURE!. I wouldn't also dare to read the novel. you see the problem? it's not friendly to Author who work hard on this novel. Only for people to not read it because of some measly review. There are only so so many review and this one got ranked almost to the top.

AwfulAbsoluteSweet:Dude…20 Ch is enough. I really don’t get the “you need to read the whole thing to write a review” bs. They dropped off at Ch 20 because they didn’t like it, simple as that: their opinion. No story will ever fit everybody’s tastes, not that serious. Furthermore the claims that this novel is botted makes sense
Mithren
MithrenLv13

At 2000 words a chapter (as a general standard that most novels try to reach) one would reach a full length book's typical word count by chapter 60. 20 chapters is plenty enough to draw accurate conclusions. Most authors here don't write high quality but still 20 chapters with low standards is still enough to draw conclusions

JustSomeDude00:bruh like a paparazzi only sees what his eyes wants to see. Not even passing the 100 mark you already judge the novel to the core. it's like accusing a black guy of stealing when he just shows odd behavior in streets
Mithren
MithrenLv13

If the author can't hook a reader with 20 chapters then how long must a reader suffer? A book can easily be written within 60 chapters. Most authors here waffle on and don't write high quality but come on. A story's start is important. If the author failed to meet expectations then the review is valid.

JustSomeDude00:bruh it's not a review when you only read 20 chapters of the novel. It's like watching the trailer then calling it trash and waste of time to read without even watching the movie. The problem here is writing a review on this novel where literally everybody can see. If this person didn't say he doesn't dare read 20 chapters ahead FOR SURE!. I wouldn't also dare to read the novel. you see the problem? it's not friendly to Author who work hard on this novel. Only for people to not read it because of some measly review. There are only so so many review and this one got ranked almost to the top.
Slider_9536
Slider_9536Lv14

+1

OpenAir
OpenAirLv3

Agreed. We, the readers, shouldn’t have to continue to read something past 20 chapters of it isn’t good. How far along do we have to wait until the book gets good? It should’ve been good from the start then, or close to it. I’m not gonna waste my time reading trash til chapter 120 to get a good read. I’d only read longer if the other readers push others to acually continue to read (like with Chrysalis.)

Mithren:If the author can't hook a reader with 20 chapters then how long must a reader suffer? A book can easily be written within 60 chapters. Most authors here waffle on and don't write high quality but come on. A story's start is important. If the author failed to meet expectations then the review is valid.
DevilPrince
DevilPrinceLv2

Finally some real review

Sahabuddin_Sk_6203
Sahabuddin_Sk_6203Lv2

read till 121 got hooked on the first few ch it doesn't suit everyone's taste I guess

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