this is my first book, at first I was just trying to write ecchi books in my spare time after work, but I didn't expect to be addicted to writing, and it felt smooth and sped up just like that, but, since I can't speak English yet, I use the app totranslating it to english, and it proved to be difficult, which proved to be interfering with my writing fluency, maybe, a lot of grammatical errors in my book, i just hope more people try to correct it, and i will also fix it as soon as possible. happy reading
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LIKEI will of course do it, just wait for the story to flow, because, this is just an initial introduction, maybe, around 10 chapters again, the real story has just begun... Sorry for the inconvenience. I hope you can hold on for a while, because, for the next few chapters, MC is still at the age of 12...
it's ok that the mc is even longer 12 but then he shouldn't mess around with a 20 year old write something like that when he's older that's what i mean