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docaquiLv112yr
2022-08-13 21:34

I gotta say, those first three chaps are steamy af. So here is my honest review: WQ: 4/5 Reason: A little bit of editing here and there especially for the narratives and dialogues and the novel is good to go. Honestly, those were the only problems I have for this novel, which is a good thing for me. SoU: 5/5 Reason: I am a binge reader, my friends could vouch me for that. And seeing that a book have many chaps already is a big YES to me. SD: 5/5 Reason: Fast and steaming hawt. I mean it, at first, I thought that it will just be those typical CEO/secretary affairs but nah, this book caught me off guard CD: 5/5 Reason: I love how the author put emphasis as what the characters taste on people and how much they care about their pride and shenanigans. Truth to be told, not many can show their characters emotions and they cover that lackings on dialogues which is kinda a turn off for me. Coz I need the emotion and this novel have that. WB: 5/5 Reason: My basis for a WB review is how the author describes the environment that the MC or ML sees or locates. And I saw that in the first line of this book. Which is a great help in imagining what is happening in the scene. Overall: 4.8/5 This book is really awesome. It actually hooked me up in the first two chapters and I want more to be uploaded. I am giddy enough to stick around see what will make of the ML or MC before they start to fall in love with each other. Kudos to the author!

The Mafia King's Revenge

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Maryixxx
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Wish, that's quite an impressive review, Docaquiiiii. Thank you so much for your well-written and honest feedback. Appreciated it a lot.❤❤

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