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Barrete_Marian
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2022-08-29 00:53

The premise is one thing but the following chapters really nailed it! I love the flow of the story that I am soooo wanting for more chapters. Good job, author!

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[Reviewed on: 16-09-2022] [Reading status: 8 chapters] [Reviewed by: Aysel Inara] ••••••• REMARKS: - Title is so on point says everything about the plot, synopsis was intriguing. I must add that it held an extreme 'punch' that itch to read more. The cover is so pretty. 10/10 here. - Talking about the FL I loved how her witty personality was crafted. She's your sassy beech who knows how to put next person in place with savage comments. Oozing a toxic aura is an additional charm, whomever touches her gets killed. Dayum! Only ml will survive. Kek. - The way her character is portrayed as mildly rebellious while following the norms of society, as per her loveless and odd marriage agreement. She seems to be having some prior plans in her head. - I'm actually surprised (mildly) and loved to see the deviation in a historical book. I'm fully aware and having a strong hunch that there will be conspiracies and royal assassination stuff ahead. - Keeping in mind the above point I appreciate a genius and thoughtful FL, which was a deviation from the usual weak white lotus FL in such settings. Please, make her fists become iron along with her tongue turning into a sharp knife. - Moving on to the ML, as much as we felt sympathy towards him I personally think he isn't a weak character despite his dwarfism. He thinks of himself unworthy of ruling being a crown Prince. But I'm certain he doesn't think of himself any less of a normal human. Even though his mother is a witch! Please, just burn her on a stake! - I'm not sure, having no clue from where the author got the idea if dwarf ml and making him grow taller after cultivating. I'm pretty sure it's gonna be dual cultivation. Kek. But how will the couple have first seggs? How awkward it would be? There are so many questions. STRENGTH: - Extremely odd couple. Dwarf ml and a fl who radiates toxic aura. - Dual cultivation. (Cough) spice! WEAKNESS: - Where the fuvk is mass release? (Puppy eyes) purdy please.

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