TLDR; Overall it's a bit 50 Shades ish mixed with a contract marriage trope, so if you're into that, this might be for you! The premise is a pretty standard contract marriage/ two people kinda tricking each other into a relationship/ love after marriage sorta deal, though it feels like there's a love triangle as well. This one's a bit of a slower paced story in terms of interpersonal development, which feels very appropriate for the characters. At the same time the story changes physical locations quite fast early on, so there's no real time to get bored of a setting. The characters themselves are fleshed out pretty well early on, though in some faster paced their "voices" can melt into each other a bit. This does also bleed into the varying POVs, but there's always a helpful note to orient yourself. Everyone does sound quite young in their dialogues, and there are some recurring spelling mistakes (lack a capitalization, quite/quiet). The, who I presume is the ML, is VERY possessive and abuse early on, though it's looking like it'll morph into something a bit more toned down. There's also the implication of revenge porn blackmail which I'm not huge on, personally, but it is the catalyst of the story.
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