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paulspy_fn
paulspy_fnLv132yr
2022-10-03 11:18

I really like this book and the author just like his other books but u really can't give this a 5 star rating. like I said before I like this book the problem is that the author is introducing to many girls to often that its getting hard to remember who's who. I am on chapter 120ish and I am debating dropping this as the girls just keep coming with no problem and for Emily who said she didn't like guys 10 to 20 chapters later she is already op giving the mc a ha**job which makes no sense. I get that the mc is just following his wishes and desires but like it's still to much to add that many and so early on in the book it really confuses me. but really other than that the story is good and is a little unique like the author's other books (which I think are better) but not a conversation for now. But great work author keep the good work 👏👍

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LivingVoid
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That's why all members of his Harem are slumbering in Mystic Wonderland. When I awaken them one by one, with trial and things, it will be easy to imprint them in every reader's mind. Also, The interesting thing is you can actually remember all members of the harem because of the connection they have with each other, have you tried? xD A group is actually just his whole family. Isabella and his daughter, Grace aunt, and Katherin aunt. Another is three classmates and teacher from his same class and a classmate's mother, Haruna. You can never forget Luna and Sierra because of how their story was woven and then there's Sierra's aunt. Lastly, Emily, the recent one. Easy peasy to remember and way easier after they slumber cuz i don't plan to introduce females fast like i did in gravel realm. The reason why there are fourteen right now is also because of the workforce (that will appear soon and is related to the Mystic wonderland so they can help MC)

paulspy_fn
paulspy_fnLv13

it's not that I am complaining about the girls it's just I forget things way to easily and with that many girls I always forget who's who

LivingVoid:That's why all members of his Harem are slumbering in Mystic Wonderland. When I awaken them one by one, with trial and things, it will be easy to imprint them in every reader's mind. Also, The interesting thing is you can actually remember all members of the harem because of the connection they have with each other, have you tried? xD A group is actually just his whole family. Isabella and his daughter, Grace aunt, and Katherin aunt. Another is three classmates and teacher from his same class and a classmate's mother, Haruna. You can never forget Luna and Sierra because of how their story was woven and then there's Sierra's aunt. Lastly, Emily, the recent one. Easy peasy to remember and way easier after they slumber cuz i don't plan to introduce females fast like i did in gravel realm. The reason why there are fourteen right now is also because of the workforce (that will appear soon and is related to the Mystic wonderland so they can help MC)
LivingVoid
LivingVoidAuthor

For deep emotional bondings and to flesh out every harem member's characters and personality, i have created Mystic Wonderland function when system reached level 2. In there, all of MC's existing women went to slumber and he awakens them one by one as they go through a trial of emotional upheaval. It's like they dream of a unique life with MC and how that life goes in the trial which is filled with struggles and tests of their love.

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Manmeet_Singh_8886
Manmeet_Singh_8886Lv14

Thanks for positive reply🥰 though it is a little sad to hear we won't be seeing pairs of these women together with mc having fun soon😭

Omkar_M_7463
Omkar_M_7463Lv12

dropped at 170 😓

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LivingVoid
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So I've written 140 chapters and I thought I would make another review. Unexpectedly, many people like this novel, which you can see from the novel's stats. I have writing experience, but frankly, I started this novel as a stress release of sorts. xD But this novel started rising fast and it gave me some hope. It might not be everyone's cup of tea but you can judge that after reading it. :) Be sure to speculate the potential of the story from the hints I have given in the unlocked chaps. The main point: it is a satisfactory novel with full-on hi-fi fantasy things, MC living his life according to his desires, getting stronger, dominating, troubles, overcoming troubles, and well HAREM. I have decided to get each new member of Harem through an interesting and exciting story instead of just them falling for MC and collecting like pokemon. Moreover, each new member of the harem will be one from every race like Elf, Fox girl, Dragon waifu, Angel, Cat girl, Demoness, etc etc, various races. Oh yeah, Even if a female is like a lower-body snake and an upper-body human, they can still take a perfect humanoid form, so that's there. The system, Reality System, is unlike other systems in a way. Especially after the system reaches level 2 because MC can help his harem in a unique way such that his harem members can also help him in return. I won't spoil but if you can manage to reach that chapter, you will know. However, I can promise you one thing. The story gets better and better as you read it especially after MC ascends to the 1st realm: Breadth Of the Wildered with a superb world and a story with a uniquely woven power structure. All in all, I am excited about the novel as well as many other readers who are reading it. Thank you for reading. Have a good day every day.

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