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2024-04-04 05:49

Honest reviews are here.. [Spoiler Alert] If you are thinking about if this is an OP MC from the beginning or not, I will clarify it for you.. It is not.. MC has huge potential as he can create the skill, but it is not as OP as you imagined.. Creative skill? It is OK but not creative.. MC first skill creation is something like berserker talent (buff temporary but then will be in weakening state after use it).. Then, his 2nd skill is mental healing.. The 3rd skill he created is detection skill (he can detect within 5m).. His 4th skill is buff skill using "greed".. So, it is creative? It kind of looks normal skills if you ask me.. If you worry that this novel is going to have a growth pace too fast, it is not.. So don't worry.. If you are worried that this is going to have MC too overwhelming or a cheating system, you worry for nothing. It is not overwhelming, and his system is his OP, but the author nerfed the MC, so don't worry.. Why? First, MC has limited slots for the skill he can create.. There are tier 1 (weakest) until tier 7 (there might be a higher tier in the future).. Second, MC created 6 skill tier 1 out of 14 slots.. Yes, 6 out 14 slot is tier 1.. He kinda wasting many slots for just useless skills and weak tier 1 skill.. Third, as you read, the skills MC created are not OP.. Like berserker, it boosts 20% of his stat (Strength,Agility,Stamina only).. 20% is super low, and this skill ALREADY max out (Lv5).. Lv5 is the max level for each skill.. Then, one of his skill creation is boosting his speed for 0.5 seconds.. Weird, 0.5 second speed boost, like what the fork? There is also skill like detection where he can detect 5 meters around him.. 5 meters, seriously? At max-level skill, 20 meter.. The range is too short.... Even normal humans can see, hear, and smell something around 20 meters.. If in the supernatural world or cultivation world, many people can move like in a blink within 20 meters.. I sure their five sense are much sharper than normal human, they probably can sense it without a skill.. His 5th and 6th skill is related to beast tamer skill.. The skill MC create is weak, or maybe I should say "balance".. This novel doesn't have an instant understanding of how things work.. It is because the system had A.I.. This will explain or teach it to MC.. Plus, this A.I. kind of love teasing MC.. Sometimes, MC seems strong, but due to the author statement or sentence in the novel that it seems MC is much weaker.. For example, the author sentence in the novel said something like, "MC is just lv.1 but his stats already at the same level as lv.15." Which makes you think that MC is strong for lv.1.. Then, the next chapter, it show how MC is struggling to fight against one-on-one with the lv.5 beast.. Don't mention when he has to fight more than one beast at once.. If the author didn't write that "MC stat is the same as lv.15", it will be different.. Because people will think "lv.15 awakener is struggling against lv.5 beast?" If the author doesn't write that, it will seem as "MC stat higher than other, but he just lv.1 awakener, and he already can fight against lv.5 beast?" Is this creative skill? Are these OP skills? Unfortunately, it is not.. So, don't worry guys, the author is making sure that this novel is not too OP or makes him ridiculously strong.. If you are looking for an OP novel, this might disappoint you (like me).. But you might love this novel if you like weak to strong type of novel..

My Skill Creation System

Herolich
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Herolich
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Welcome to this story! Before you embark on this journey, I'd like to give you some introductions. 1. This story will mainly focus on the MC and his creative approach in using various combinations of skills to make him the strongest character. 2. This story will focus on the intricate plot and myriad of mysteries that have been carefully crafted. There are plenty of quests that the main character must complete in the well-constructed World Building. So, enjoy the journey! 3. As for the female characters, you'll find many of them near the MC. However, I won't be focusing too much on their romantic relationships with the MC. So don't expect too much in this regard; male and female friendships will have equal representation in the story. 4. I am writing this story with a great deal of care and attention to detail. I have crafted a detailed list of all the characters' backgrounds, traits, and motives. Each character is unique, so you can easily comprehend their distinct personalities. 5. I'm striving to keep a balance, so I'm limiting myself to writing only the necessary amount to prevent burnout or a decrease in quality. My goal is to release at least one chapter daily. 6. You can get additional content such as official character designs, stickers, Wiki, and illustrations if you join the Discord server. Please reach out to me on Discord (Herolich#3449) as I don't have a permanent server invitation code yet. 7. I'm not a native English speaker, so if you find any mistakes in my translation, please let me know in the comments. 8. If you have any questions, comments or feedback, don't hesitate to reach out. I'd also appreciate it if you leave a review. Enjoy the story!

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CDAWOODS
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Reveal spoiler

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MacTosh
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The story is progressing well as far as I've read. As someone who loved the author's previous book, I look forward to what will happen. As in your previous book, it is obvious that you care about world-building and I don't have a problem at the moment. There aren't many characters for now, but I like the people who appear. I hope you can write them like living people. And I know you can because I loved the characters in your previous book. If there are things I want to point out, I think you can make artificial intelligence talk less. He's a cute character, but the two of them talk a little too long sometimes. And I want the wars to be short but exciting. The battles in his previous book were good, but sometimes they could get too long. Personally, I loved it, but some people get bored. I guess that's it, I hope you tell the story you want to tell, as long as you write, I want to see the end of your stories.( Sorry for bad grammer)

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aReN2003
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Welcome back Herolich, your previous book was one of the rare books I liked on this site. I hope you complete this book before you leave it to the end.

2yr
SecondLittlePig
SecondLittlePigLv12

Nice. Excellent start, as always, and very, very, very fun new idea. I hope the story grows well and the author publishes a lot of chapters daily! All the very best!

2yr
DaoistvNyxg3
DaoistvNyxg3Lv3

this book is very well written. it is still very early in the book (45 where I am) and the characters have a sense of realism. so far no goofy cliches. MC powers are versatile but not overpowered. overall I am optimistic that this will be a unique story with a deep world and relatable MC

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4thesakeR
4thesakeRLv1

Happy to be back after a long time Herolich. As a fan of the old book, I look forward to what you will write in this book.

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Unsightly
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Nice story but sadly I don't see this going anywhere with the amount if views it has, usually 90% of authors with less than 60k views drop the books.

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den210
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so Mr author are we expect this to have 3000 chapter or more thats all I wanna know

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