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2023-08-29 12:21

The beginning of this novel was promising, but afterwards, the author introduced too much nonsensical content into the story. I've read all the chapters, but I can't understand why the protagonist consistently spares Lear. The repetitive cycle of the MC defeating Lear but not killing him, only for Lear to return and confront Shen Fei again, has become monotonous. The ending of this novel was lame and disappointing. The author could have provided a more satisfying conclusion.

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