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2022-08-09 20:09

First reviewer! I'm glad. The title, I love the fact it hid something important. Although a bit misleading, rest assured it isn't the major kind of cultivation most are used to and I am glad. The synopsis itself is smooth and tells you what you majorly need to know to follow up and get immersed in the story. I love the start of the story. Might I add, I love the characters and even the one I hate, I ate well. I could feel Pete's pain and suffering. I love the way Chen adapted to Pete's life even with how he protected his sister from those loan sharks. And how determined he is to solve his problem and live this life in a different way than what Pete did. Author's writing style is nice, simple, straight to the point and enticing.👍 But I feel some parts should do better if they were written to show the readers. No bulky text per paragraph which is nice as it makes easy reading. No info dump. Pacing is good, even though it is just 5 chaps in, giving readers time to get to know the characters and their growth. World background ✓ Character Design ✓ Writing Quality ✓ Story Development✓ Updating Stability✓ A system story to love ✓ I would give another review when book has gotten further than this. For now, all you need to know is that this is what your time. Give it a try and you won't be disappointed... Nice book! Goodluck!

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