This looks like a promising chapter, the prologue had some useful explanations to tell us how OP the mc has potential to be, and the first chapter was released just minutes later, three other characters were also introduced in chapter 1, how they looked was also explained and quite some world building was shown for Nexus, so the only guess is that Elias is the MC of a novel, right? I definitely want to see where this story goes from now on. I want to give a Power stone but I don't see the button, will definitely do so when it appears!!!!

I like how the author explain the detail while telling the story flow of MC. They said that a good introduction builds good and exciting story line. It's new for me to read. I'm sure that I will stay tone about this unique story line.

Seemed pretty good, the world building aspect of the story is done pretty well, and overall seems like a pretty interesting novel, can tell the author put some thought into it.

The description towards the story is so refreshing to read, It feels so calm to imagine the protagonist's thoughts and movements like I can see it as an anime. I do hope you can get more chapters, so with that said I'll be binging some more chapters byeeeeeeeeeee.

As far as i read it is good still have to read it , the story is great , the writing is great and im expecting is going to be better and better after some chapters.

The book seems really well written with several possibilities as to where it could go. The characters seem interesting each with there own backstory. I would actually enjoy a history chapter

So, 4 stars across the board. 1. Writing Quality: The writing quality is okay. The author kinda switches weirdly between POV's sometimes, and even in the middle of some sentences. Other than that, the writing quality is good. 2. Stability of Updates: 4 stars because it is a new novel, so I can't really rate this right now. 3. Story Development: Again, it's a new novel, but from what I am seeing right now, the novel's pace is pretty good, but generic, basically the same as an isekai. Also, Author info dumps a little in the first chapter, I would recommend that you use the first chapter to hook the reader before info dumping in the second or third chapters, just to keep the newer readers from dropping. 4. Character Design: Character is good so far, again, generic revenge driven MC, but he's good and believable, which is better than most novels on the platform. 5. World Background: I have yet to see that much of the world yet, and from the power system shown in the first chapter, it's pretty unique, but there are some generic things, another 4 stars. Overall, pretty good novel so far.

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This work is still budding, yet I was already enchanted by it. The starting lines, complemented by the beautiful and neat writing, made this novel worthy of praise. I'm looking forward to the continuation.

nice story and interesting characters and world background