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milordd
milorddLv102yr
2022-08-12 18:37

I've read the first chapter, and though this is only the start, the writing has drawn me in. The characters are realistic and the dialogue flows nicely! The story starts with a common narrative but I'm excited for how the author will continue. There could be some work with editing the chapter, since I noticed some grammar and punctuation mistakes but it didn't affect my quality of reading. I hope the author will update soon! 💕💕

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TalentlessCarin_
TalentlessCarin_Author

Thank you so much, i'll keep updating!!!

Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

before I start I need to know if this novel is a harem (=more than 1 wife) I hate harem

TalentlessCarin_:Thank you so much, i'll keep updating!!!
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TalentlessCarin_
TalentlessCarin_Author

This novel is not harem, I'm actually sucks at making that kind of genre...

Ashborn1609:before I start I need to know if this novel is a harem (=more than 1 wife) I hate harem
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