Review Detail of Rin_Nurnia in Lost In The Sand Of Darkness

Item: Lost In The Sand Of Darkness
Rating: 4

Review detail

Rin_NurniaLv41yrRin_Nurnia

I really like the title name and the plot does look interesting but there are few mistakes and some of them, I already pointed it out in the comments

Zero_One_1531

Liked by 2 people

Zero_One_1531AuthorZero_One_1531

Thank you for your opinion and I will try to avoid mistakes in the future to give you a pleasant reading

1yr

Rin_NurniaLv4Rin_Nurnia

You're welcome👍🏻

Zero_One_1531:Thank you for your opinion and I will try to avoid mistakes in the future to give you a pleasant reading

1yr