Review Detail of DragonRiderOfHell in Flames of Desire

Okkk so for a constructive review or as constructive as possible. The novel starts off with a bang. And its good in the probably hundreds of novels I've read now it has one of the nicest and best starts ive read. Followed up with small touches of world building with the ancient tale its great. The character building hasn't occurred loads but it is present and this is all in 4 chapters! All in all a great start and it definitely pulls in the reader. So amazing