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SighingClouds
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2022-08-07 08:21

Verdict from this humble beggar: Writing Quality: Top-notch! I can see the author's mastery over the language. The way she weaved the words and formed sentences were simply admirable! The vivid scenes, the emotions... all were done in a simple yet attractive manner. Story Development: Starting from the synopsis till the chapters... I was in awe on how the author builds up the tension. Admirable! Admirable! She easily created a page turning story! Character Design: I'm in awe! To make the first few chapters in line with the romance theme... Introducing both the male and female lead at the same chapter as well as showing their emotions and clues about their characters. Truly! Well done! Updating Stability: 10/10 World Background: This too is another admirable aspect! It wasn't info dump nor redundant. All were controlled in a level which won't affect the flow of the story but the same time make you more immersed while reading. The little details and description are subtle yet perfect. Overall: This novel is a must read. Grade: 10.00000/10

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