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Rin_Nurnia
Rin_NurniaLv42yr
2022-10-31 22:08

What I like about this book is the intense action scene where the guy was trying to survive himself from all the dangers he had encountered. A few thing you need to improve is your grammars and some of the sentences you wrote seems brought a different meaning that doesn't seem suitable with the scene E.g. 'She's so hot'. In this sentences, are you telling the readers about Ava being a hot woman or you were trying to convey that she felt hot because of the humid air? Also, you always mistyped the guy's name in a few paragraphs as I read a few of your chapters. The guy's name is Jack River but sometimes you typed his name as Tom. I suggest you to proofread again.

The Last Werewolf (Silver Blood)

Jenival_Enyia
4.9
168 Chs

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Saeon_Barie
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I really do appreciate your review and corrections. They have been taken care off.👌🏻

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Hey there! I just want to say the fact that you are giving this book a chance greatly warms my heart. Some of you already know this, but writing isn't easy at all. it takes time, physical and mental work and a lot of creativity and passion to pull off. But the highlight of it all is getting people who not only enjoy but appreciate all that hard work. So thank you, not just for reading and reviewing, but for supporting me with gifts and follows and shares. You are the reason I write and you make it worth my while. Love, Author. @Jenivalwrites

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I am an avid fan of werewolf, vampire stories and this book is definitely going to my library. I love how the descriptions are so vivid, the world-building is really great. A lot of descriptive words are used in the story which makes it easier for the readers to imagine or construct a scene in their head. Good going author!

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I have no choice but to give this book a freaking 5 star considering it's just four perfect chapters available and I am already completely hooked. I'm reading your other book and I love it and all but this book just takes the cake. It is so well written, that I want to cry in relief. Thank you so much for this story and please, I am on my knees begging. UPDATE! 🥵

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This really but different, I actually never read a story about werewolves before, but oh boy… after this I can assure you it’ll be going to my genre of books. I love it~!

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Can't wait to read more. This book is well written and absolutely thrilling. I couldn't stop for a minute. I'll add it go my library and make sure I read to the end.🥰

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Killer Synopis...love the title and cover...i love the book...it well fleshed out, easy to understand...steady follow of chapter realease...there nothing better than this..and its worth the five stars..Keep shinning author...simping for our Fl[img=recommend]

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I read some chapters and I must say that I like the flow of the story which makes me want to read more. My favorite character Ava, and I wonder what will become of her if her dream turns into reality.

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Quite enjoyed the first 17 chapters. Jack, the innocent ML being thrust into circumstances he has no control over and the FL, Ava, possessing a bloodline through no fault of her own, are brought together by the hands of fate, where they must struggle, fight and even kill to get what they want - freedom. The story is still in its infancy, but it shows great promise as characters are well fleshed and have strong individual motivation. Recommended for anyone with a love for the werewolf genre

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I have only one word to say: MASTERPIECE. The author writing quality is top-notch. The story development is 10/10. The characters are just perfect. The world background is just something else. I have to say, I am glad I found you, author Jenival. Your books are amazing.

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The first thing I was drawn to was the cover, then the synopsis and when I read the prologue, I was a goner. This book, just like Justice and Desire is amazing. I am now a loyal fan.

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