It's a pretty good story so far. minor and confusing grammar errors. For example in the second chapter (minor spoiler) the child wraped in cloth, they keep switching gender he, her, and back to being a boy. This isn't a final rating as the author is still editing. So far if they gave a general description of the characters like hair color, eye color, mentioning Britain helped, hopefully this helps and the author sees this.
devonsewn
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LIKEAh more respect to you then! I am not good at learning languages. For a second language it is pretty good! I've read more sense my review, I think I'll be here until the end.
devonsewn:Thanks for pointing out my error. I correct it. As for grammar, you must have already felt that English is not my first language, I will try to improve as I write more and more. Enjoy!