I like the author's storytelling technique. It's like I am reading something out of my diary when I was in highschool. The opening paragraphs made me excited. It got me thinking, how will the main character get her heart broken, and how will she handle it? I look forward to more of this story, and I wonder how the male and female lead will develop feelings for one another. For now, my only suggestion/comment is adding more descriptions of the setting. Good job and Good luck in WSA author-chan <3
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