Review Detail of XavierKing_6497 in In Game Of Thrones World with LOTR system

the story is good like the storyline but I would like it if you would slow down( don't make the story feel rushed) and it would be better if you are not making most of the characters immortals or if you want to make them immortals don't make everyone an immortal let it be a privilege to only people that are close to them another thing you did not account for is in his kingdom there are supposed to people that will start losing their bloodlines to marrying of people that don't have magic