Grammer has some serious issues not like not knowing english, more along the lines of not knowing how to use auto correct or spell check, the words are combined and punctuation is non existsnt so that sentance structure makes it unreadable, which I dont say lightly. Plot is ok and idea itself is a great idea just poorly executed with 0 true backstory and just using the system to just insert anything the author can't plan out on their own, overall unreadable, but decent idea.

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Theirs like a bunch of stuff wrong with this fic I cant even start to list them like the biggest problem with this fic is its grammar like it's really and I mean it really hard to follow so of the stuff dont even make sense, and my second problem about this story in how the author literally just gives the name of the character original LOTR character to the M.C when he could have been original and given him a name but that's like most authors on this sight.

I can't call this story more than a teenage fantasy, a harem and an easy walk of the main character through the world of Game of Thrones, that's the whole point of this story

for me the mc SHOULD not even be there, have you ever seen a president (king) giving advice to another country (kingdom) I don't think so? or also staying in another kingdom that is not his, it is as if he is no longer native to his own land, and also because he made the mc a king but he is not doing any of that he is just a councilor from another kingdom nothing more , I here excited to see a mc king of his OWN KINGDOM, but I see a councilor from a kingdom that is not even native

The idea is good but the writing is really bad. From Grammar to spelling to words that do not even make sense being there. It’s really hard to read with so many mistakes

I didn't even get past chapter 2 all the errors that are on there even with the paragraph comment corrections that the author never used actually fix the chapters even after 7 months it's not worth the read cuz it's like he just threw words on a paper and didn't even try to fix anything that was wrong with them

the story is nice but the grammar and the spelling . seriously dude please find a editor or someone to help out with proof reading your chapters. it really ruins the mood when some lines go line . "Dragon hold sword down foot kick and her" really please get an editor

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