You're the first destiny fanfic that i have seen thats both sort of long and enjoyable, and i have been getting in a lot of destiny contant as the new dlc is out soon, so when i saw your fanfic i was sucked in with how awesome it is and please if you can, can you upload more chapters.

If I could say anything about this book, is that it keeps you on the tip of your toes waiting for that juicy moment when everything clicks just perfectly. There are many ways to describe this book, but the one I feel that fits best with is the jaw dropping feeling one gets from the in depth lore, the environment, and the feeling of mystery even with prior knowledge of destiny. Then there is the magnus opus of the book which is the main character void who dives into the smallest nooks and crannies for that hidden loot that just feels like a loot driven goblin looking for their next grab. The one thing I can say is not amazing, but still good the upload schedule which is erratic at best and nothing at all at worst.

I don’t usually read video game stories because I usually find them boring compared to actually playing the game. But this story is an exception and has kept me locked into it 100%. I binged read the whole story in two days and now I am sitting here desperately waiting for a new chapter. I give it a 9.5 out of 10. The .5 that is missing is from the update schedule. Everything else is amazing and I am truly surprised by how invested I am in the story even though I’ve played the game and know what is going to happen due to cannon. 100% would recommend.

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As always, shameless review with a pinch of salt. I love destiny lore and the game is fantastic. Aside from all the cash grab antics of course. Anyhow, I've been plotting on writing this fic for a while now, I hope everyone likes it and its entertaining. I've listed all the rules in the auxiliary chapters and you can check that out if you want to be super technical. Release rate would be around 2-3 times per week. Don't get your hopes up, because I am busy writing other stuff as well. At least I would never drop it without telling you guys though. I am not the best writer, but I do care about writing something we would all enjoy. So leave a few comments if you liked the chapter and let me know.

It's only Chapter one but I'm pouring all my hope into this story!!! I love Destiny and want more of it! The spelling and grammar seem good, and the auxiliary chapter seemed promising. Hope to see more!

Destiny fan fiction is very rare but with just three chapters i can tell that the story will be engaging and not rushed as well as the extra "system" not taking away from the story to much it seems like the bounties from destiny one where they dropped weapons and armor. overall I can't wait to see what you do with this but I think gunslinger is better than nightstaker but hunter is my favorite so I'm not complaining

Like Destiny? Then get your as- out of the reviews and start reading

Honestly I thought I already wrote a review but I guess I was wrong. This is one of the lonely few destiny fanfics that I’ve actually enjoyed. Well written and enraptures you in the narrative that’s set out for you. The characters are likable and all the conversations feel real. I appreciate you writing this story author-san. Keep up the hard work!

I have waited forever for a good destiny novel on here and finally got it please don’t drop it at all. Destiny is basically my favorite fps game.