Too much Detailing! which kinda ruins the flow here and there (I am still doing these mistakes, so I know it's hard to changeš ) But that only proves that this novel is extremely ambitious. The story, worldbuilding, character appearences has so much thought and effort put into it, which allows the grandeur scope of the story to be visible in every passage of the story. And it also seems the author is working hard on rewrites... so good luck with thatš. Overall, this story has a great potential to be a great epic tale.
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