A very promising start. The first chapters were a bit difficult to read, but with each subsequent one you get to know the characters and their surroundings better. I will also note the interaction between the Kellen and Ella, right up to the goosebumps, so sensual. I love the romantic component in books. Author, good luck in writing - it's hard work, but you're doing great!
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