Review Detail of Holy_mackrel in Academy Artesan Procreation
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The concept is certainly new enough for me to say that I've not read anything like this before. The only thing that was difficult to follow was the flow of sentences since it's not a style I'm familiar with. But once you get used to it, you can easily enjoy this story. Interesting that father questioned the moral ambiguity of his son without even hearing anything about it first but it does make sense in the context.
Academy Artesan Procreation
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Greetings from Peru. I have experience with the subject of 25 years or more. And this novel deals with the theme of David: "He who had his heart according to the will of God." Although the generational facts, multiplied by his own acts. They give rise to a mixed environment between evil and goodness. It remains to be seen if he is really an Antihero or a hero! The plot presents that he is linked by blood to several antiheroes: So if his destiny is already known, why are there people who idolize this type of leadership? If the Savior is another and divine in nature, so be it from a human lineage in David.
You know this but the reader doesn't. So it'll be best if you explain these things slowly in the story and not overwhelm it all at one point. The human brain cannot remember that much and by the time I reached the last chapter, I forgot most of what came before it. just a suggestion based on my experience but you should write in your own style and how you feel comfortable with your writing.