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Review Detail of Lardeen in Nawaki Live! [Narutoverse]

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Lardeen
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MC shouldnt Give nuch to girls. Kushina is here annoying stop IT. I wanna badass MC not pussy. its not funny, please change IT a Little, and dont focus SO much for training anothers...

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Nawaki Live! [Narutoverse]

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Wow a hard criticism, well i'am first time writer i write that under the synopsis, sorry for you inconvenience, but i'am not gonna change that i do it my way.