Contrary to most of the reviews here, I actually liked the System taxing him for going OOC. It would have been more interesting to see how the MC works around the limitations the system placed on him. But then a few chapters in, the penalty for going OOC gets removed with a single cheap purchase. If this was the case why have the penalty system in the first place? After the OOC penalties were removed, the novel turned into a generic HP fanfic, except its extremely boring. Things are happening, the MC does stuff, but they are all disjointed. There are certain relationships and interactions here and there but there doesn't seem to be any purpose, consequence, or even development from having them. The MC is extremely robotic in that sense. There are upgrades and powerups provided by the system, but they don't do anything (there is no impact or influence of getting them in the story). Maybe they will happen later down the road, but if that was the case then the purchases of the power ups could be spaced out or made more expensive. Writing quality, stability of updates get full points, but the rest of the parameters leave much room for improvement.
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