Interesting premises. I like the concept and although it still is a little early to give a review, why not help? writing quality: Good. I mean there are errors here and there and some of the sentence structure are weird as if translated raw if that make sense. All in all good, readable but could still be better so only 3.8 stars for that but lets round it at 4 ⭐ Story development: Like I said, I like the lore and now is still too early to judge but still 4⭐ for potential. character development: Too early to comment on but I feel there's something lacking. Maybe it's the sentinent system for me, don't like (my Opinion only) 3⭐ Updating: Your biggest issue in this novel. You are not consistent on upload time. You have too little chapters, like no offense but if I wasn't kinda bored rn and the fact you asked to check it out, I'll barely if not don't read a 3 chapters book. wanted to give a 2 but 3 ⭐ is good too background: Nice no complaints, its just 3 chapters was not expecting much so 4⭐ Overall: Its a good story but is lacking chapters and imo sentinent system is not my cup of tea but I love the idea and effort behind. Hope this helps and keep it up, make sure you release more chaps and you'll definitely get a contract
legendary_awesome
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LIKEIndeed, I mean there's a reason why every webnovel trial book release 20 chapters at first then go 5 chaps a day till 40. But hey, don't push yourself too much cuz at the end of the day you still need to have writing your own novel and not feel burdened by it
legendary_awesome:I'll try, I guess in the early phase it would be better to release more chapters. Thanks for the review.image
Truck_Samaa:Indeed, I mean there's a reason why every webnovel trial book release 20 chapters at first then go 5 chaps a day till 40. But hey, don't push yourself too much cuz at the end of the day you still need to have writing your own novel and not feel burdened by it